David and The Lingering Sadness...

Sunday, October 01, 2006

A Poem . . . . . .

The Beginning . . . .



Is that what it is?

beyond the shadows

that breath without a body

who's smile's in the flowers.


I can't tell


People say the glass is broken

I say the room is breathing

Your mansion has many rooms

who's breathing windows

burst the glass
and
bend the will
and
see the smile

even when the flower is gone.

5 Comments:

  • At 1:02 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    You have such a beautiful way with words Chuck, its really lovely and I must confess I felt a little emotional reading it.
    Do you draw on your own experiences when writing poems?

     
  • At 1:04 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Why does everyone on this site have to be such a raging HOMO?
    I mean for goodness sake have a word with yourself

     
  • At 1:48 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    ohhh silly philly stevens. Dont be such a gloomy Gus. Turn that frown upside down.

     
  • At 4:37 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    man, this site had potential but its really starting to suck

     
  • At 8:42 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Chucks, when I read you words I just want to give you a big hug
    missing you
    *blessings*

     

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