David and The Lingering Sadness...

Saturday, February 24, 2007

Prose poetry

I've decided to take up prose poetry, the most noble art form. My first attempt is quite small and not very good; it's simply called 'David'

the asphyxiated milk cow, stole
the sunset, the scarecrow was
not impressed, by this show of
tmesis and impudence, float

away... away? waddle and
dotage, verbose until the
merging at the end of
the world, biodegradeable

the chanch and I mutilated
we fled and dined as the
gibous daring moon, was
as the natives say, erect!

The D man...

Please add your own verses.

6 Comments:

  • At 5:54 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    lingering, like the sadness, one
    only feels after fucking in a
    DVD room, annyong, annyong, D to
    Em, the middle I'm stuck, between...

     
  • At 3:30 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    The harsh eclectic baron wasteland, alas
    the dmz, what folly and wrecklessness
    the needy photosynthesis, of a barren
    Saturn moon, my baby why, I left
    you, to dwindle, Korean friction, fiction

     
  • At 6:01 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    D, I think your pome is very thoughtful and deep. I'd like to know more about you and chanch and how you got mutilated, and why the crow was not impressed by the cow stealing the sunset; also, why did the milk cow steal the sunset? I think it is because the milk cow is a symbol of maternity, life, regeneration, and if you are using the milk cow as a symbol of these things, then the theft of the sunset, which symbolizes the same things (although in a waning sense), could mean that you are predicting a global/economic paradigm shift. Please comment. I'd love to hear more.

     
  • At 6:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Eva, you are so far off the mark, it is simply unbelievable.

    If, you really don't understand my quite simple poem, then I don't feel like explaining it to you.

    So there.

     
  • At 9:45 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    D,
    I didn't mean to offend you. It's just that your pome was so thought provoking and imagistic, that I couldn't help but to offer my interpretation in hopes that it would be similar to your personal vision and poetic goal. You artists get awfully touchy about your work sometimes--relax . . .
    ES

     
  • At 11:14 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said…

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